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[Horace Ep.2: Razor Blades]

Poor Horace ...

Horace didn't make it this time either :(

Overall, it's not bad but I liked ep1 better.

I didn't read your "Author's comments" and at first I didn't know how he got into the hallway. Maybe, mention that before the movie starts - in the movie.

The dog growling was good at first but the images didn't convey a menacing dog. Also, it seemed to walk after Horace but running/chasing might be more appropriate. Looping the dog growling didn't work for me either. I liked in ep1 that a pigeon eye showed up with the pigeon cooing (is that the right word?).

About Tuti TV: graphics are 75% done but my brother has been busy so we couldn't work on the dialogue and voice recording.

Violet-AIM responds:

Thanks for the constructive criticism. He was in the hallway because he was left there by someone who didn't like him. Someone had built a maze or trap for him to die there. I looped the dog growling cause I couldn't find a decent angry dog barking sound effect. I get most of my sound effects on the net and sometimes it's hard to find exactly the right thing. I was lucky to even find that one pigeon cooing sound for the previous episode. Hope to see your tutitv soon when it's done.

[Horace Ep.1: Pigeons]

Nice spooky movie

Hi Violet-AIM,

Nice to see you submitting again.
I liked the movie. It has a nice creepy feeling. Probably, Hitchcock felt something similar when he created "Birds". :D
Graphics were good. Sounds could be somewhat better. Overall, good job.
p.s. did you get any reply about "that looked canadian"?
-Istvan

Violet-AIM responds:

Thanks TutiTV for reviewing my movie. I'll probably be making more episodes with that Horace guy, mostly short flashes which won't wear me out and make me lose my patience. About that Canadian remark, I didn't hear anything else, so I dunno about that. Oh well.
Btw, are you almost done with your Tuti ep.5?

[vamp war1]

Could be good

Good work on the gfx. If you make an interesting story, it could turn out well. Good luck.

FireHound responds:

k thanx

[Jesus in... The MATRIX]

Hard to say

hehe. there're some funny parts in it. the voices are hard to hear sometimes - consider adding subtitles. Also, you could make the gfx more detailed.
Good job!

stealmyinternet responds:

shitty mic... part 2 will be cooler since i decided to actually put effort into intense battle animations

[SBC Ep. 1: "The Attack"]

Good start

Fairly decent job. I liked the movie backgrounds - they matched the movie well.
Improvement: the motion of characters and objects seemed as if things happened in slow motion. You could speed them up. (unless if you wanted to make them appear in slow motion). It takes time to figure out how long each action/motion last but with time you'll improve.
Keep it up!

SmokeBombClock responds:

Hey thanks! {{{TutiTV}}} Yeah it does move kind of slow, I'll be sure to speed that up, I'm experimenting with some new things to make it move at a faster pace and look better! :)

[Ghost Motel 3]

Nice ghost story

I like the Ghost Motel series. Well drawn characters and story. Good job!
Looking forward to the next one.

Violet-AIM responds:

hey thanks for watching my movie and for reviewing it....i love ur tuti series, would like to see more!